https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aVgeJ5eqlSM
Genre - Drama
Camera work - the camera work applies within the rule of thirds and also uses over the shoulder shots and close ups, this is for when they are within conversation as it switches from each characters and this lets the viewer keep up with the conversation
characterisation - the main male character developed by coming more out of his shell and learning more about his story and how he has become more open with the female character. the female character is a bold and talkative character
production value - there is a high production value on this film due to the quality of the video and how well made the graphics and titles are
script - the script is partially minimal as there is mainly conversation between each character until the third character turn up and joins in conversation
editing - there is very minimal editing throughout
Wednesday, 18 May 2016
Tuesday, 10 May 2016
LO2 - Rushes
Clip 1: Wide shot clip with good lighting, shows character walking through front door.
Clip 2: Wide shot clip with good lighting, shows character running upstairs.
Clip 3: Wide shot clip with good lighting, characters sat on sofa talking - will be used in final edit.
Clip 4: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 5: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 6: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 7: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 8: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 9: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 10: Good lighting, convincing footage – will be used in final edit.
Clip 11: Wide shot clip with good lighting, footage is convincing – will be used in final edit.
Clip 12: Unusable footage due to sound quality not being good.
Clip 13: Only first few seconds of footage are to be used as the actors forget their lines in the last seconds.
Clip 14: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 15: Wide shot clip with good lighting, the footage will be used in the final edit.
Clip 16: Wide shot clip with good lighting, the footage will be used in the final edit – cut in middle as actors forget lines in the last few seconds.
Clip 17: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 18: First few seconds of clip are usable; the lighting within the clips is of an okay standard. However, unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 19: First few seconds of clip are usable; the lighting within the clips is of an okay standard. However, unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 20: First few seconds of clip are usable; the lighting within the clips is of an okay standard. However, unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 21: First few seconds of clip are usable; the lighting within the clips is of an okay standard. However, unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 22: Wide shot clip with good lighting, footage is convincing – will be used in final edit.
Clip 23: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 24: For audio purposes only.
Clip 25: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines.
Clip 27: Unusable footage due to actors forgetting lines, over exposed scene.
Clip 28: Accidental shot.
Clip 29: Accidental shot.
Clip 30: Wide shot clip with good lighting, footage is convincing – will be used in final edit, lighting needs to be edited with a colour pallet for the final edit.
LO3 - Offline Edit
Evaluation:
The first thing we noticed about this edit is that we need to change the sound of the door. It is slightly too squeaky, therefore finding a more appropriate sound on Free Sound would be better. We had the idea to remove the audio when they are both running down the stairs and setting the clothing on fire, and replace it with sad music in order to create more of a dramatic scene. With the dining room scene we also need to add more stills of James in so it isn't all just Hayley. We need to add the other half of the short film as well and create more transitioning when it comes to the bruise reveal at the end. We will also add titles and credits to the final short film.
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